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Inner Beauty 5/?
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laurie_ky From: laurie_ky Date: June 16th, 2007 12:41 am (UTC) (Link)
There's a fairy tale feel to this story. I'm getting curious to know what the heck Blair did to end up in his spirit animal form.


You asked for a look-see. I'm not very good at doing the beta things but I did see these:
Even more so as none of Aquino’s healers can find anything wrong with me, [safe] for my heightened senses {save}

There [where] whispers everywhere about how their prince had brought the stray wolf into their castle. {were}
Laurie
dreaming_k From: dreaming_k Date: June 16th, 2007 05:54 am (UTC) (Link)
I really appreaciate your pointing out those mistakes, they've been corrected.
I love fairy tales, so of course I'd try my hand at writing one. ;) How is James going to turn Blair into a human again, is what I wonder. lol.
Thanks for your comment!
dreaming_k From: dreaming_k Date: June 16th, 2007 05:56 am (UTC) (Link)
*looks sheepish*
I forgot your cookies for spotting the mistakes. *hands over cookies*
Thanks again!
laurie_ky From: laurie_ky Date: June 16th, 2007 01:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
::skips breakfast and goes for the cookies::
although I hardly think I earned them.
But thank you,
Laurie
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